menacejeans' avatar fukn rocks, to bad kloquewerk's avatar is of his box

 

man that's so weak, your rhymes i mean
it's like your tounge got thrown up between
one of those LA shootouts that i be hearing about
you need to keep trying dog, that's no doubt

i'll bring it back and try to keep it civil
give it up man you should be rapping with cybil
Now I gotta go to class, XML Services
My lyrics are all gone, i'm done, i murdered ya

 

keep tellin yourself you good
maybe if I was wack I would
when you're walkin to school, tryin to hold yourself steady
but there's no for class, cuz you got schooled here already

 

one more thing...

since Vista came out today, watch for the online attacks
I'll meet you after school by the fu@#in bike racks

 

vista may have come out but i aint no fool instead of him meat me after school and if your not scared you should be cuz im sending your pc virus' like herpes

 

My flow is so hot that I'm makin the block squirt,
Like the milk filled boobies they were drinkin from clockwork!

 

Im so grateful that i can relax and sit back
just 4 or 5 months till the hell that is Iraq

at ease ive finally gotten my nerves and my wits back,
offguard i donno if i should be scared Iran might attack

stressin deployments you never know when they start
when your there time slows and love leaves your heart

You write letters and read books to pass time
everyday mailcall goes "Is that one mine??"



hmmm not any ebonics but its real so dont hate, im not that good at this just needed to vent

 

being in the service is hard i know this i aint no retard, i give props to those who go

and fight for my freedom so i dont live in fright, if i could i would gladly go but for

nowill sit back and watch the show. the news everyday says soldiers have died, and

some have been my freinds, and yes ive cried, but when im done with school i will be

on the hunt, and whipe out all the fools living in dirt huts

 

lol, but thats kinda ___ that you said you were sukcing milk from my boobies

 

It was directed at the movie, Clockwork Orange. It came to mind when looking at your sn.

Thought you would've known ...isn't that where you got your sn from?

 

hahahahaha, i was like wait a minute lol

 

Man, I wanted to start a thread similar to this. Like a freestyle thread. Didn't think scionlife would eat it up.

 

looking at my computer screen all you broke back hoes

gang up on me like a team, but dont worry its cuz im holding

my own while all you fake a$$ cyphers tryna dethrown

but what i say is what i live all you bustas dont know, all you

fools are what i call suburb hoes, youve never known what

its been like to go with out , while you battle on the internet

starting to pout. ive been in wars youve never heard about ,

ive seen my freinds killed in front of my eyes, that night i

heard the screames and cries

i shot that fker square in his crown, and i watched his body

fall limp on the ground

ive said before i come from the streets where you hear

sirens and guns blasting like mad beats, and you pray to the

one above, and in the corner of your eye you see the

heavenly white dove, and you know ur blessed cuz when all

the dust settles you count the holes in your vest....

 

dude, you're from new mexico not downtown LA

fake ****

 

Wow..he so proud that he lives in the hood....
With a mentality like that youll be stuck there for good.

See I born in the Projects of Sa-Town
Got much love for pops cause he had the ambition to move us out,

Calling me a suburban hoe...well Id rather be a hoe
Than an ignorat a$$ fool thats proud of the ghetto

See Ive been there before and Ive seen it all.
from my friends being shot and killed to watching my enimies fall

The hood either makes you or breaks you
but its how you plan your future and where its gone take you..

You claiming to hard like the streets made you a G
but when in the presence of a real man, I bet you sit down when you pee

So congratulations..Ill give you your Hood Card
But to me it dosent matter where you come from to be hard

 

i was born and raised in the ghetto, i'm true to the streets
better sell those 2 cent rhymes to your local swap meet

 

many people i have seen walk this world with no esteem

and i am one i must admit, my candle is now no more lit

i have been told my soul has turned cold, that i feel no more

and my mind has tore, but through this all ive always taken

the fall and i cannot rise anymore, ive simply walked out the

door, everthing ive beleived in has made no difference ive

pretended to tougher so i wouldnt suffer, but i cant play this

game forever, i wish i could pull a lever, and make it all go

away, maybe reset to a happier day, but i dont posses the

power, so all i can do is sit and cower, while my life is

planned by the one above, and no i dont mean the white dove

they say its the one with everlasting love.

but ive never felt this love they talk about, makes scream,

cry and shout, cuz i was rejected and not on of the ones that

was selected to be placed in high esteem, never meant to

play on his team, and when i speak of him, you know the one

i speak of, the one that never planted the seed of love in my

soul i feel a gaping hole, a parnoid void ive always felt, and

yes ive been to his house and even knelt, but never once

felt the hand on my shoulder, and since this never happned

my heart has turned colder and colder-

 

First off let me introduce myself
Im not Jay-Z matter of fact take 10 years down
take 30 billion papers off tha bank account
Im not black and i dont sing with Ja Rule,
If 30's the new 20 then im in middle school,
I dont have the sense to not put wheels on my ride

verse dos-
Now lets move on to my credentials
Im from the land of the presidentials,
yep the two G. B.'s; Yep im from Texus,
Where boys like to push no less than a Lexus,
Music sounds prehistoric, Its Ch-chopped and screwwwwwwwwed
I hope you heard us clearly, Free PIMP-C and RIP DJ SCREW
Its the anthems of the south, is that not enough?
so if you mess with texas im liable to get tough

Props to tCTaco for hes a Texas Boi too!
ScionJon for adding to my verse too
Hows that guys???

 

Wow this thread blew up.
There's over 10 pages now.
I was only gone a while
dude what the f**k?!?

I skimmed through the posts.
No longer having the most.
I guess that means
I can no longer boast.

Well, at least I still have the VD.
Your mom she's a *****.
She's the one that gave it to me.

But anyway, back to the thread
Here you guys are, all bangin' on Fred....
Well, I was gonna join in
But I just found a wart on my head!

So no more rhymes.
I'm off to the free clinic.
Don't post so much guys,
I'll be back in a minute.

 

this threads been quiet, should i bring it back
i'm gonna drop it like a home land attack
where one for all and all for one,
we have the right , so grab your gun

well f*ck all these terriorists, damn them to hells
they're all on my list, they're all infidels
those boys in iraq, all up in the fight
stay strong brothers and to all a good night