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Old Nov 13, 2008 | 07:38 AM
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Been contemplating having this be my logo.

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Old Nov 13, 2008 | 07:52 AM
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i like the text.. but iono about the spray gun.. maybe make it come out a little bit more?
Old Nov 13, 2008 | 07:53 AM
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Give it a shot if you want.
Old Nov 13, 2008 | 02:49 PM
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You need more umlauts.
Old Nov 13, 2008 | 02:57 PM
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To throw out some ideas:

-I'm assuming that FLEAwerks is a painting business. Is that all you do?

-What are you going to use this logo for? With it's size, it lends itself nicely to business cards. Consider making another with some contact info in one of the corners. There are lots of sites that make business cards cheap. (1000+ for $20)

-What are the sploches on the werkz side of the logo supposed to be? Maybe make them more like paint drips vs random, hard edged lines.

-Maybe make the vertical line separating FLEA and werkz a little smaller

-I'm not a fan of the kind of haloing around the werkz part. I think it would look better if it were around all letters, or none of them.

-The words FLEA and werkz are centered vertically along a center line threw both words. Maybe make them so that they are both aligned along a line along the bottom of the words.

These are just a few ideas to think of. Overall, it looks really good!
Old Nov 13, 2008 | 11:39 PM
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Stick to photos FLEA Jk jk..

I would do different colors, use a different color spray gun which will stand out more and possibly have a spray effect coming from the nozzle which fades in to the text making it look as if the text was just sprayed.

You can bug me to help you on this you know, I'm a photoshop wizard
Old Nov 14, 2008 | 04:46 AM
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i feel like the kerning on ur font is too spaced.. i dunno why i feel like that tho.. looks good.. i dunno.. make my eyes wander a bit..
Old Nov 14, 2008 | 05:42 AM
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Originally Posted by burstaneurysm
You need more umlauts.
Old Nov 14, 2008 | 03:51 PM
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Stop stealing Sheep. (lol) Your line spacing is a little big. just a little too much space between letters.

I'll agree with Ben on most of what he said...

One exception, instead of aligning all text to one line, what about offsetting "werks" ie:

FLEA
WERKS

that really sucks in straight text, but I'm sure you get the idea.

And, you've got the paint splatters on the Werks side, what about a flea (photorealistic style, not silhouette), looking like it's crawling towards your name?? (thinking prolly wouldn't work, but worth trying, no?)

Looks good overall.
Old Nov 16, 2008 | 01:58 AM
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nice!
Old Nov 16, 2008 | 02:01 AM
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put a sata on it
Old Nov 16, 2008 | 03:52 AM
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I like it. But it looks like you stuck with it already. Good choice.
Old Nov 16, 2008 | 04:09 AM
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If you like it; flaunt it.
Personally, I think it's pretty cool.
Old Nov 16, 2008 | 04:50 AM
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Old Nov 16, 2008 | 04:53 AM
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Damn it wont die. I keep hitting that bug but its till there.
Old Nov 16, 2008 | 05:13 AM
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^You're trying to kill me? That's it, I'm painting nothing for you! I'll send you an iKONA garnish!
Old Nov 16, 2008 | 05:42 AM
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Kennon..

I think U been HUff'in TOO much Paint!...LoL

The last one was suppose to be for "Avatar" Purposes...So that people can read it when its small...
Old Nov 16, 2008 | 03:29 PM
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I like Option 3....

But...

The angle on the spray coming out of the gun is off.

Center the second line under the logo

Take the color out of the paint splatters and make them look more like this:



Definitely looks good!
Old Nov 16, 2008 | 05:21 PM
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Wheres the none option?
Old Nov 16, 2008 | 05:45 PM
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i like 3 but with the line in 1



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