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Old Feb 1, 2007 | 12:44 PM
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Old Feb 1, 2007 | 01:35 PM
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Originally Posted by tCTaco
It was just another day, I woke up and got dressed for work
I worked in dirt so my outfit contist of jeans and a Dickies shirt

I was in a ditch 4 feet deep diggin for electrical lines
I heard a truck horn blaring, it was my boss pulling up from behind

He jumped out and said stop what youre doing and listen up.
He turned up the radio as he got out of his truck.

I could barely hear the radio over the noise of a bulldozer.
And then I heard the station say that the Twin Towers had fallen over

Right then I didnt know how to react.
Must be some sort of accident, the US could never be under attack

I stood there in shock..my body began to feel numb
Then I grabed my cell phone and called my friends and fam to tell them I loved'em

I thought to myself.....no way how could this be
We left work early and hit the ice house on the corner to see the TV

We saw the video clips of the planes entering the building..
I thought OH MY GOD, and prayed for the women men and children

I stared for hours at the TV and thought how could this have happened
Then the news released info of a man named Bin Laden

Quickly my tears dried up and my anger sets in
We must find Bin Laden no matter the cost In order to win

This is my home, my life, my land where I reside
You try to take this away, I hope you are prepared to die

We are America and We wont go quietly in the night,
You started a war and believe it, we are prepared for the fight

We dont hind behind a mask like a coward.
You messed up and underestimated Americas power

Now youre running for cover and hiding in dirt holes
We have Special Forces trained in finding and diggin out foes

We stand strong and arent afraid of your terroristic ways
The United States of America will be The only Super Power till the end of Days!

Sorry...Just got through watching some 911 doc and thought Id share my story..
SUPPORT THE TROOPS!!!

Amazing.
Old Feb 1, 2007 | 01:41 PM
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i disagree, whether or not you know why we fight
that doesn't mean they aren't over there in the light

of the burning sun of the scorched land and desert
hoping that many of them come home without regret

without feeling of helplessness, doubt, and remorse
but we all know they did what they had to of course

so be this as it may they are over there fighting away
leaving us here safe for at least one more day
Old Feb 1, 2007 | 02:54 PM
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Yo, I said yo
yo bro, whats up bro, i said yo!
(ring a bell, from a few pages back? )
Old Feb 1, 2007 | 03:02 PM
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lol
Old Feb 1, 2007 | 06:07 PM
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sitting in class, tryna bust my a$$

the algebra problems be making me think

damn at the math game do i realy stink

naw cuz i got a calculator

and the techer be looking at me like for half an hour

wondering what im doing, im doing real good

damn i finsished my test now im in a good mood
Old Feb 1, 2007 | 06:18 PM
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Old Feb 1, 2007 | 06:30 PM
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scion jon, you sure you're in school?
cuz no offense man but you spell like a fool
you might wanna keep your nose in those books
and possibly give hooked on phonics another look

i dont mean to single you out man
but if you spitting rhymes, spit something we can understand
all i hear is waa waa waa like charlie browns teacher
but who am i kidding i didnt come around to preach here

i may be just a little white girl from the burbs
but i can still spit fire and throw down some words
i hope all this battling is taken in stride
cuz i'm just messing with you, don't let this kill your pride.
Old Feb 1, 2007 | 06:33 PM
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Old Feb 1, 2007 | 06:37 PM
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lol..that was pretty awesome
Old Feb 1, 2007 | 06:39 PM
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haha thanks guys
Old Feb 1, 2007 | 06:44 PM
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So in this thread there are rhymes bout war, white ppl and hoes
yet again you were all saying we would write different prose?
Old Feb 1, 2007 | 06:45 PM
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Originally Posted by PAxAgirl
scion jon, you sure you're in school?
cuz no offense man but you spell like a fool
you might wanna keep your nose in those books
and possibly give hooked on phonics another look

i dont mean to single you out man
but if you spitting rhymes, spit something we can understand
all i hear is waa waa waa like charlie browns teacher
but who am i kidding i didnt come around to preach here

i may be just a little white girl from the burbs
but i can still spit fire and throw down some words
i hope all this battling is taken in stride
cuz i'm just messing with you, don't let this kill your pride.
You sure you arent on that "white rappers" show? LOL, thats pretty good actualy, nice use of 'hooked on phonics", lol
Old Feb 1, 2007 | 06:45 PM
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i'm lovin the new female style that you bring
i'm diggin it ma, so keep doin your thing
keep them rhymes comin,
keep them guns gunnin
and keep all them fake a$$ rappers on this thread runnin
Old Feb 1, 2007 | 08:01 PM
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ill bust my rhyme straight and simple

ill be like clean and clear and pop the pimple

so you better be in preperation just like H

cuz your a$$ be burning like witches on steaks

like a mad hurican im comming

and i hope you get to dodging and ducking

cuz ill rip the passage way with my destruction

my words flow like a sirens seduction

listen to the words as they flow

they plant the the seed in your brain and start to grow

and everytime i say something

i got you thinking with such abruption

you spit your words like a 2 year old

but in this game of cards ill neva fold

cuz right now im running the table

your ugly as an a$$, so ill lock u in the stable

so as you find the words to bring me down

just remember one thing i never frown

instead i drown in all the laughter

yall preaching like your a pastor

so heres my contribution to the thread chapter

so now ill wait for what your gonna say

come get me i got all day...
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Old Feb 1, 2007 | 08:09 PM
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Originally Posted by jsa3mm
Your English is atrocious
Your Ebonics are obnoxious

My rhymes are everything far from flawless
But when read the English language doesn't regress

lmao english is not my first language, but i bet i can pack you up like baggage

im the head waiter just wait and see, ill spike something in your food and and make

you flee, off to the toliet yes you go, is that ____e running down your leg oh no,

**** leakage be in your pants while your asking in the next stall

for a tampon max...
Old Feb 1, 2007 | 08:14 PM
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Old Feb 1, 2007 | 08:18 PM
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dont talk about my momma cuz she is dead, the good lord

made her rest in an internal bed

that was realy hurtful cant you imagine

losing your mom in such an awful fasion

never got to see her from past the age of 9

and since then i havnt been fine

a mother love is something not bought

be thankful you still have yours to whipe the snot

i grew up taking care of myself

so before you judge me

look at yourself

my lifes been hard not far from the track

but id do anything if i could have my momma back
Old Feb 1, 2007 | 08:21 PM
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Words of vemon I inject them in fakas like a Brown Recluse
Tied the sucka up with my rap pages just like a noose

This fool thought he was he was a big man and tried to swing on me
I opend up my mind and KO'ed his punk a$$ with metaphors and similes

Could it be?....I was put here to put these studio rappers in check
attack them with my knowledge transformed into a monsterous dialect

Intelectualy advanced I flow with almighty power
working 24-7 taking out 48 MCs, thats 2 every hour

In school I leaned how to add and subtract fast
Keep bumping your lip, lets see fast you subtract this Nike outa ya a$$

Play for real, ya fool, believe I play for keeps,
I was born on the slab so Im a child of the concrete

Where I sleep where dwell is the same as hell
You tried to follow in my steps got caught up, slipped and fell

People say at first listen that i sound the same
Thats when I pull out the Mic and blow out they mind like Kurt Cobain



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