you need to mention the dangers of 'body bling' and the damage it can do to your paint, Also, might specify the types of vehicles that are best for the Gangsta lean. you know Chevy Caprice, Impala, Buikc Delta 88's, late 70's domestic boats, Buick Reagel/chevy monte carlo/pontiac grans prix etc...

 

forgot to mention though that it is a FUNNY paper. hopefully you get teo read or present them aloud because it'll have people in stiches. Well done!

 

Yes, I added the Caprice to the paper!

 

what happened with this?

 

My timely English teacher still has the roughs.

 

YES!

 

yeah please move to tech lol

 

Are Sagged pants still fashionable? It makes people look like they have little tiny legs and a giant elongated torso, especially if they have those "long" t-shirts on.

 

I turns out that my teacher was "too busy" to grade the papers so she just gave us completion grades.


That helps me become a better writer...

 

direct your teacher to this thread, i hate it when My teachers would do that, its like they want you to be all creative and really try to do something unique but then when it comes down to reading everyones paper they get lazy and pull that completion grade on you.
maybe your teach could learn a thing or two from this thread lol.

I showed a bunch of people this paper and they all loved it!!!!!!