We have paid for 10 hours worth of design work. I'd like to finish it in 2 mock-ups if possible but no more than 3.

 

cool thanks robert! 100% support for what your doing!

 

The graphics on the hood look like a picture of real words on a monument (tomb of the unknown soldier or something). I looked at pictures of the tomb of the unknown soldier, but I didn't see those words on there. Maybe I didn't look hard enough. I'd find out which was the case. If its from a real monument, I'd leave the spelling how it is. If not, I'd go ahead and change the spelling.

I agree that the "Fallen Heroes" text would look cool with stone or concrete-looking lettering.

 

looks awesome

 

Just looks awesome!!!! The changes you are going with are on the right path, can't wait to see the updates

 

"Honour" adds a little reverence to the car and it's meaning in my opinion. Might not be the American spelling but it's not like it confuses many people.

The stars and stripes look good to me. Like a flag draped down each side of the car. I thought maybe making the stars larger would solve the "200 stars" issue but I really think they're the right size and that most people wouldn't count them. It's too bad we can't have a star for each Fallen Hero.

I'm glad the sponsors are cool with no logos on the car itself and I still think the rest of us could display the website on our cars in support of Robert's efforts.

*I put a shameless plug in on the Off-Topic forum and asked for donations. See the post here.